Some good comments but to improve your marks you must go into more detail where possible. eg the colour blue might suggest to you that this product is aimed at a particular gender? the words "Out of bed" might suggest that whoever uses this product might get up to what?
Some good comments but to improve your marks you must go into more detail where possible. eg the colour blue might suggest to you that this product is aimed at a particular gender? the words "Out of bed" might suggest that whoever uses this product might get up to what?
ReplyDeleteANALYSIS = 4/10 = D-